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The Story Department Est. 2009 · Karel Segers
Section E · MM on Monday 45 entries 25 August 2026

MM on Monday

Until Mystery Man disappeared in 2010, he was a regular contributor to The Story Department. His very last public article was published here and it is still ranking as the most popular post on the site.

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Section E · MM on Monday Showing 25–30 of 45
  1. The Art of Dialects (2)

    Mystery Man left us some time before 5 June of this year. The Story Department continues to republish his best…

    7 min
  2. The Art of Dialects (1)

    I type these words from my favorite leather chair in my favorite mystery cigar store. For the “Mystery Photo” in…

    8 min
  3. Elements of Suspense (2)

    The Elements of Suspense also talked about editing in order to maximize tension, that when emotions are high, Hitchcock resorted…

    3 min
  4. Mystery Man on Melodrama

    What is melodrama and how do we avoid it? I’ve noticed that people have differing interpretations of melodrama, ranging from “sad…

    6 min
  5. Elements of Suspense (1)

    “If, in the first chapter, you say there is a gun hanging on the wall, you should make quite sure…

    6 min
  6. Merciless Logicians …

    ... & The Sliding Scale of Plausibility. Okay, a question for all the scribes: Must a thriller be totally plausible…

    3 min