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The Journal Vol. 20 · 1,240 entries 25 October 2026

Movie Reviews · 2 min

Mini Review – The Rocket

The Rocket Mercifully Short Review by Jonathan Empson  Ahlo is an only twin (as Peter Cook would have it), his sibling having been stillborn. In Laos,…

Mini Review – The Rocket

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best of the Web 1 Sep

Story & Structure :: Concept = Hook :: Finding Your Voice In Your Screenplay :: TV Pilot - The Blacklist :: Daily Dialogue — The Bourne…

Best of the Web 1 Sep

Logline It! · 3 min

Logline it! – Black List 2012 – Week 30

Writing loglines is an essential skill for screenwriters, from early development through to the pitch. In this section, we review the loglines and short synopses of…

Logline it! – Black List 2012 – Week 30

Uncategorized · 1 min

[Video]: Jenji Kohan’s Stories To Tell

Critics adore Orange Is The News Black, the kooky brainchild of Jenji Kohan (Weeds, Tracey Takes On...). The enigmatic showrunner discusses getting stories about women on…

[Video]: Jenji Kohan’s Stories To Tell

Story & Structure · 8 min

Writing the High ROI Screenplay (Part 8)

This week we continue with part eight in a twelve part series of JT Velikovsky's doctoral thesis: “Understanding And Exploring The Relationship Between: Creativity; Theories Of…

Writing the High ROI Screenplay (Part 8)

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best of the Web 25 Aug

Story & Structure :: How to Write a TV Pilot :: 5 Ways To Write A Script Scene Like You’re Trying Your Shoelaces :: The Secrets…

Best of the Web 25 Aug

Story & Structure · 5 min

What is a Real Movie Anyway? Part 2

We continue on with the study of What is a Real Move Anyway? Catch up by reading part 1 here. by Sergeant Hauville There is one…

What is a Real Movie Anyway? Part 2

Movie Reviews · 1 min

Mini Review – Kick-Ass 2

Kick-Ass 2 Mercifully Short Review by Jonathan Empson Dave/Kick-Ass, the superhero with no actual superpowers, is bored with life now he’s hung up his suit. He…

Mini Review – Kick-Ass 2

Logline It! · 3 min

Logline it! – Black List 2012 – Week 29

Writing loglines is an essential skill for screenwriters, from early development through to the pitch. In this section, we review the loglines and short synopses of…

Logline it! – Black List 2012 – Week 29

Story & Structure · 7 min

What is a Real Movie Anyway? Part 1

In 2010, while visiting the Cannes Film Festival, the late, great film critic Roger Ebert wrote a column for the Chicago Sun-Times. He was quite taken…

What is a Real Movie Anyway? Part 1

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best of the Web 18 Aug

Story & Structure :: The Four Types of People Most Likely to Murder Their Families :: Is Any Exposition Scene a "Crock of Sh*t"? :: Scene…

Best of the Web 18 Aug

Logline It! · 3 min

Logline it! – Black List 2012 – Week 28

Writing loglines is an essential skill for screenwriters, from early development through to the pitch. In this section, we review the loglines and short synopses of…

Logline it! – Black List 2012 – Week 28

Movie Reviews · 2 min

Mini Review – Frances Ha

Frances Ha Mercifully Short Review by Jonathan Empson Frances (Greta Gerwig, also the co-writer) shares a New York apartment and pursues her dream of becoming a…

Mini Review – Frances Ha

Pitching & Selling · 7 min

Surviving Script Development

Congratulations! After all that hard work and self-doubt you’ve finally had your spec script optioned / been commissioned to write a treatment or script. It feels…

Surviving Script Development

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best of the Web 11 Aug

Story & Structure :: Visual Mindscape: Anchors, Triggers and Writing Flashbacks – Oh My! :: Damon Lindelof on Blockbuster Screenwriting :: Scene Of The Week: 'Dirty…

Best of the Web 11 Aug