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The Journal Vol. 17 · 1,240 entries 26 August 2026

Quote of the day

Take what’s useful, argue with the rest.

Karel Segers · closing line, every report we send
Vol. 17

News · 1 min

Do you have the tools?

One of Celtx's first three new "Learning Templates" is a tool pack for script development: "The Writer's Development Kit". I can highly recommend it, not only because of its ridiculously low price, but…

Story & Structure · 7 min

10 Reasons why movies aren’t novels

Next month, Michael Hauge and Steve Kaplan will be in Australia for two weekends of story classes. This month we run a special guest contribution by…

Book Reviews · 1 min

A Season of Writing Drama

We have raved before about Yves Lavandier's book Writing Drama. This time we have something very special to announce to you. Throughout June, July and August…

Story & Structure · 2 min

Exposition in Cameron’s The Abyss

Yesterday I had the enormous privilege and honor of watching James Cameron's The Abyss on the big screen, sitting next to the movie's concept designer Ron…

Script Check · 5 min

Action/Description: How detailed?

The first step is asking this very question: how detailed should it be? Next you decide what is important for the understanding of the scene and…

MM on Monday · 3 min

Elements of Suspense (2)

The Elements of Suspense also talked about editing in order to maximize tension, that when emotions are high, Hitchcock resorted to tight shots and close-ups, but…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 23 May 10

:: Detox your writing superstitions. :: "Hurry up and wait." :: Summer time, bad time for specs? :: How to pitch a series. :: Adult comedies:…

Story & Structure · 3 min

An ending left up in the air

Last night I watched UP IN THE AIR. Finally. Before I went to see the film, I read a few pages from the script (including the…

Story & Structure · 3 min

Why movies aren’t novels (1)

Next month, Michael Hauge and Steve Kaplan will be in Australia for two weekends of story classes. This month we run a special guest contribution by…

Book Reviews · 2 min

Lew Hunter’s Screenwriting 434

While Jack Brislee is trying to con himself into believing there are actually things more important than screenwriting (let alone The Story Department), I stumbled upon…

Video · 1 min

James Gray is angry. (Audio)

Here is an exceptionally gifted filmmaker, profoundly unhappy with the state of the craft. At the time of writing, this excerpt of an old CS Magazine…

Script Check · 4 min

Activate your Dialogue

Give your characters something to do. Always. Long dialogue without action essentially means you are filming talking heads, which is profoundly anti-cinematic. It's a simple rule but…

MM on Monday · 6 min

Mystery Man on Melodrama

What is melodrama and how do we avoid it? I’ve noticed that people have differing interpretations of melodrama, ranging from “sad movie” to “soap operas” to “anything…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 16 May

:: Robin Hood: Robbing From the Poor :: John August about Theme. :: Where do you find good ideas? :: Can a writer have more than one agent?…

Pitching & Selling · 1 min

Query massage!

Yesterday was about HOW TO. Today: How NOT TO. What follows might make you feel (a lot) better about your own query letters.  If, however, either…