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The Journal Vol. 17 · 1,240 entries 26 August 2026

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Take what’s useful, argue with the rest.

Karel Segers · closing line, every report we send
Vol. 17

Story & Structure · 2 min

Mystery Man vs. Sherlock Holmes: 1-0

Last Tuesday was Australia Day, so that was my excuse for not publishing my own weekly blog post. This week I was going to break down…

MM on Monday · 11 min

A Screenwriting Revolution!

I’ve been having some revolutionary thoughts lately. And these are beyond the ordinary musings of a screenwriter, such as, “I’d love to see a nuclear explosion…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 31 Jan 10

:: Structure learnable, character not, says Alexandra S. :: Sundance Film Festival Roundup. :: Peter Kim's 3 Rules for Spec Writing. :: Play mind games to write…

Pitching & Selling · 6 min

Agents: Some Fine Print

A few people responded with valid comments to our last article on agents. Rather than a lengthy response in the comments, here are some thoughts on…

Book Reviews · 6 min

Reviewed: Save the Cat!

Jack Brislee reviews “Save the Cat!  The Last Book on Screenwriting That You’ll Ever Need” by Blake Snyder. Michael Wiese Productions.  Studio City.  California.  2005. 195 pages. …

Stuff · 1 min

What’s the soundtrack to your writing?

For many, music stimulates the Muse. Do you have music in the background (or foreground) while writing?  Or are you hell-bent on dead silence? And if…

MM on Monday · 3 min

Flashbacks are Your Friend.

So, the question – what is the point and purpose of a flashback? A flashback is usually a revelation of character, is it not? It shows…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 24 Jan 10

:: Never in cinemas. But read the treatment here: Spider-M4n. :: Subplots: What are they? How can they enhance my script? :: Subplot up close: "Back to…

Uncategorized · 7 min

The Golden Boy of the Black List

Last month THE MUPPET MAN was voted to the top of the industry’s Most Wanted: The Black List. Screenwriter Chris Weekes talks to Karel Segers about…

Book Reviews · 6 min

Reviewed: Writing Dialogue for Scripts

Jack Brislee reviews “Writing Dialogue for Scripts” by Rib Davis A & C Black Publishers Ltd. London 2008. 206 pages. ISBN 978-1-408-10134-6 Price: US $16 ABOUT…

Stuff · 1 min

Next month’s movie: your choice!

Every first Tuesday of the month, we publish a structural breakdown of a popular film. This month we did Avatar, last month you voted for Shaun…

Pitching & Selling · 3 min

The Twitter Pitch

With movie executives making decisions in split seconds and people's attention spans decreasing frighteningly rapidly (is this sentence getting a little long for you, already?) surely Twitter must be offering…

MM on Monday · 16 min

Mystery Man & The Art of Exposition

Let’s cut to the chase. If you have a scene that’s only about verbal exposition, in other words you have a character that’s just verbally explaining…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 17 Jan 10

:: 'Hurt Locker' tops Critics Choice Awards :: Awkward moment: Reitman and Turner on stage :: Oscar predictions - The Screenplay Categories :: ScriptChat at the Golden…

Pitching & Selling · 6 min

Understanding the Agent

Hollywood agents: to trust or not to trust? What is the reality of an agent's role in your screenwriting career? Our Hollywood insider, Steven Fernandez gives…