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The Story Department Est. 2009 · Karel Segers
Section AAH · feedback 12 entries 25 August 2026

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  1. Best of the Web 31 Mar

    Story & Structure :: Missing – Compelling Characters :: Zero Dark Thirty Screenplay Analysis :: Screenplay Review: Olympus Has Fallen…

    2 min
  2. Best of the Web 10 Mar

    Story & Structure :: Writing a Scene in 11 Steps :: V.O: A Christmas Story :: Enhancing Your Story ::…

    2 min
  3. [The Writing Director]: My Relationship with Criticism

    "This is probably the gayest clip ever made." This is what I’m getting myself into. I spotted this constructive feedback…

    5 min
  4. Best of the Web 15 Jul

    Story & Structure :: Character Breakdown :: Bad TV Teaches Lessons :: What is 'Voice'? :: Creating Memorable Characters ::…

    1 min
  5. Best of the Web 10 Jun

    Story & Structure :: Hook Them From The First Line :: A Failure To Communicate :: Make Your Relationships in…

    1 min
  6. How thick is your skin?

    An ongoing climate of attack & defense in our industry inspired me to these thoughts on the value and nature…

    3 min