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The Journal Vol. 17 · 1,240 entries 27 August 2026

Story & Structure · 4 min

The Flashback: No Time Like The Present

The flashback - like its ugly brother the Voiceover - has caused some heated debate. If used well, it can be a great way of getting exposition across…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 1 Apr

Story & Structure :: Three's a Crowd: Multi-protagonist Stories :: 10 Secrets to Creating Unforgettable Supporting Characters :: Great Character: Arthur Edens (“Michael Clayton”) :: Screenplay…

Pitching & Selling · 4 min

Screenwriting: from Fail to Sale (4/5)

There’s this notion among screenwriters that if a plot point doesn’t work, you can brush over it, I’ve done it a bunch of times, why? Because…

Logline It! · 3 min

The Judges – Circalit Loglines (12)

In this section we are publishing the loglines from the participants of the Circalit / Story Department "First Draft Script Contest". Our judges have reviewed the…

Video · 1 min

Rian Johnson: Interview

Rian Johnson, writer-director of indie cult hits Brick and The Brothers Bloom talks about film noir, learning the craft, the difference between writing and editing, the…

Pitching & Selling · 5 min

Screenwriting: from Fail to Sale (3/5)

Two years back a friend said to me, why don’t you enter some of your scripts into scripts comps. Phooey, I thought, (yes I thought Phooey…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 25 Mar

Story & Structure :: Plot points of Big Fish :: Script: The Big Lebowski :: Never Mind The Hunger Games – is The Host the New…

Movie Reviews · 1 min

Mini-review – 21 Jump Street

21 Jump Street Mercifully Short Review by Jonathan Empson   We first meet Schmidt (Jonah Hill) and Jenko (Channing Tatum) as respective geek and jock teens…

Script Perfection · 5 min

Screenwriting: from Fail to Sale (2/5)

I love the following principle, implemented by many beginning screenwriters, myself included. Let's transpose the idea to another profession – the manufacturing of, say, a car.…

Logline It! · 3 min

The Judges – Circalit Loglines (11)

In this section we are publishing the loglines from the participants of the Circalit / Story Department "First Draft Script Contest". Our judges have reviewed the…

Story & Structure · 1 min

Video: Andrew Stanton

As the director of John Carter, Andrew Stanton got the cold shoulder from the American audience. But with Wall-E, Bug's Life and Nemo to his name,…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 18 Mar

Story & Structure :: Andrew Stanton: The Clues to a Great Story :: No Dramatic Stone Unturned :: Screenplay Review: The Wedding :: Screenplay Review: Winter's…

Movie Reviews · 1 min

Mini-Review – The Woman in Black

The Woman in Black Mercifully Short Review by Jonathan Empson Widowed and depressed lawyer Arthur (Daniel Radcliffe) is sent to a remote village to sort out…

Logline It! · 3 min

The Judges – Circalit Loglines (10)

In this section we are publishing the loglines from the participants of the Circalit / Story Department "First Draft Script Contest". Our judges have reviewed the…