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The Journal Vol. 17 · 1,240 entries 26 August 2026

Quote of the day

Take what’s useful, argue with the rest.

Karel Segers · closing line, every report we send
Vol. 17

Uncategorized · 12 min

11 Laws of Great Storytelling

Jeffrey Hirschberg says: "While it is impossible to have a foolproof formula, I have learned certain principles dramatically increase the probability of your story achieving a…

The Screenwriter's Life · 3 min

Is it Learnable?

Each time I teach, I learn. In a weird and wonderful way, every student is a teacher. Each individual has valuable experience or knowledge to share…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 13 Dec 09

Here's our weekly selection from the blogosphere. Feel free to recommend anything or give your feedback in the Questions and Comments below. And don't forget you…

News · 1 min

Chris Weekes tops The Black List

A big congratulations to Chris Weekes, whose script MUPPET MAN tops the newly released Black List with Hollywood's most liked unproduced scripts. It's great for Chris…

Uncategorized · 7 min

Introducing Minor Characters

Does the guy appearing only in the second scene of your script for half a page really need a two-page intro? Christina Hamlett shows you how…

Software Reviews · 5 min

iPhone Reloaded

Three months ago today, we reviewed the hottest iPhone apps for screenwriters and filmmakers. Since then, no less than 25,000 new apps have flooded iTunes. Cherie…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 06 Dec 09

Here's our weekly selection from the blogosphere. Feel free to recommend anything or give your feedback in the Questions and Comments below. And don't forget you…

Uncategorized · 5 min

Screenwriting for Editing

"The humbling truth is that the film is made in the editing room". -David Mamet The screenwriter is the first step in the film making process…

Structure Analysis · 7 min

Structure: Shaun of the Dead

Shaun of the Dead (S. Pegg & E.Wright, 2004) was my first iTunes movie download. I needed it urgently and the download was quick & cheap.…

Best of the Web · 2 min

Best o/t Web 29 Nov 09

Here's our weekly selection from the screenwriting blogosphere. Follow "StoryDepth" on Twitter and receive the news as & when we find it. And don't forget you…

Script Perfection · 6 min

Strip the Script

How do you avoid having a rubbish script? Learn how to identify what's necessary and what's not and throw out the junk. What's the junk? Read…

Story & Structure · 4 min

A Story within a (Toy) Story

In great movies, structural principles apply to more than one level: story, act, sequence etc. Once you understand how drama functions, you can apply it to…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 22 Nov 09

Here's my weekly selection from the blogosphere. Feel free to recommend anything or give your feedback in the Questions and Comments below. And don't forget you…

Story & Structure · 6 min

Hollywood’s Best Kept Secret

What is Hollywood’s Best Kept Screenwriting Secret? Answer: The Expanded Scene Breakdown. What is the Expanded Scene Breakdown? Read on to find out! Another step in…

Story & Structure · 3 min

The Untouchables – The Mid Point(s)

A movie's Mid Point usually fulfills a number of functions. In the Hero's Outer Journey, an event occurs that makes the Hero change the approach to…