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The Journal Vol. 17 · 1,240 entries 26 August 2026

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Take what’s useful, argue with the rest.

Karel Segers · closing line, every report we send
Vol. 17

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 15 Nov 09

Here's our weekly selection from the blogosphere. Feel free to recommend anything or give your feedback in the Questions and Comments below. And don't forget you…

Script Perfection · 5 min

How to Write a Readable Script

What are the primary criteria that will ensure your script stands out from the rest? Steven Fernandez reveals some essential secrets to getting read. In my…

Story & Structure · 3 min

The Untouchables – Hiring the Mentor

Mentors appear to the heroes at the exact right time, usually in the second sequence, after the Inciting Incident has left the hero lost and confused.…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Best o/t Web 08 Nov 09

Here's our weekly selection from the blogosphere. Keep informed by following me on Twitter (bottom of left sidebar). And don't forget you can subscribe to our…

Uncategorized · 9 min

Alien: Sex in deep space

With a prequel to the 1979 hit flick Alien directed by Ridley Scott in the works, Bryn Tilly re-opens the case on the original film and…

The Screenwriter's Life · 3 min

Is It Worth It? [Will This Sell?]

Like pretty much every consultant, every now and then I'm asked: "Is this worth it?". On the surface, the question means: "Do you think this script…

Structure Analysis · 6 min

Structure: The Untouchables

David Mamet has never equaled the tremendous power of his eighties screenplays. The Postman Always Rings Twice, The Verdict, The Untouchables and even his own directorial…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Screenwriting Best of the Web 01/11/09

Here's my weekly selection from the blogosphere. Feel free to recommend anything or give your feedback in the Questions and Comments below. And don't forget you…

Script Perfection · 6 min

Mental Spackle

Spackle |ˈspakəl| Noun: A compound used to fill cracks in plaster and produce a smooth surface. What is 'mental spackle'? Merrel Davis explains how to ensure…

Uncategorized · 6 min

OZ Filmers: “If they only loved us.”

Why don’t the majority of Australian films attract Australian audiences? Metro Screen in Sydney threw down the gauntlet before a panel of industry players, while Dominic…

Best of the Web · 1 min

Screenwriting Best of the Web 25/10/09

Here's my weekly selection from the blogosphere. Feel free to recommend anything or give your feedback in the Questions and Comments below. And don't forget you…

Uncategorized · 6 min

Chick Flick

The third film in our series of short animations nominated for an Inside Film award is 'Chicken of God', directed and written by the animated Frank…

News · 2 min

OZ Film Vs. OZ Audience

Today some high profile industry people will be debating why Australian films are unpopular with the audience. I have blogged about this before but I believe…

News · 10 min

Screenwriting Expo: Day 2 & 3

After an invigorating but relatively exhausting Day 1, the rooms were overflowing as the L.A. locals who couldn’t get a day off on Friday came to…

Uncategorized · 5 min

The Movie Party: Raindance Review

The Raindance Film Festival wrapped a week ago. Writer/Director Scott Murden, whose film The Dinner Party got a full house - and a nom for Best…